A 45-minute strategic diagnostic to identify why winnable bids
are being lost against the scoring criteria – and what
would realistically improve outcomes.
Built on 23 years of bid writing experience
and over £3.3bn in secured contracts.
What This Session Is
This is not a sales call
Where AI is already being used, the review also considers:
whether it is supporting your bid process,
or creating inconsistency in how answers are produced and scored.
Where AI is being used, inconsistent answer structure often increases
variation across responses and leads to additional rework.
What We’ll Explore in the Review
What you’re bidding for and what’s at stake
How your bid process performs under pressure
Where marks are most likely being lost
What patterns repeat across wins and losses
The focus is systemic causes - not individual bids
What You'll Gain
A clearer view of what’s helping and hurting your bids
Insight into repeated answer structure gaps, aligned to scoring criteria
A realistic sense of what improvement requires
Confidence about where to focus
For some organisations, that leads to next steps. For others,
it provides reassurance and direction.
Example Outcomes
In one case, a client was losing consistently despite a strong offer.
The issue was not capability. It was that the answers did not align clearly to how marks were awarded.
By aligning both the opportunity and the response to the scoring criteria:
£120m in contracts won
72% win rate achieved
In another case, a client had no defined bid process.
There was no consistent approach to structuring answers or aligning them to how they were scored.
By introducing answer structure aligned to scoring criteria:
9 wins from 12 tenders
£20m in contracts
Revenue grew from £3.5m to £10m
These outcomes were not driven by writing more content.
They came from structuring answers so they could
be clearly assessed and scored.
Who This Review Is For
Most Valuable If You:
Submit bids regularly
Have accountability for win performance
Have strong capability but inconsistent results
Want systemic improvement, not isolated fixes
It is typically booked by senior bid leaders or those
accountable for bid performance.
When It May Not Be Necessary
You bid very infrequently
You are looking for a rewrite rather than diagnosis
You want generic feedback
You are not open to candid discussion
If it is not the right fit, I will say so.
What This Review Is Not
A free consulting session
A detailed bid rewrite
A tools or AI demo
A disguised sales conversation
The value lies in structured diagnosis
and informed decision-making.
How Booking Works
Choose a date using the short form.
Answer a few brief questions.
Each request is reviewed for suitability.
Appointments are confirmed once fit is assessed.
I offer a limited number of reviews each month to ensure focus and quality.
Requests are reviewed to ensure the session will deliver genuine value.

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